Yes … just like that
by Anthony McLaughlin
Oct 27, 2011 | 440 views | 3 3 comments | 5 5 recommendations | email to a friend | print
This early morning I wander down a hard-packed earthen path leading to the Benicia waterfront. No clear destination in mind – just a desire to breathe ocean air, the jetty still partially shrouded in dense sea mist before me.

Taking a moment’s rest against a weathered pier railing, my eyes are drawn to the magnificent sea lion in the water below. How graceful is its private ballet, rolling – spraying vapor from the lungs, flippers first carving the water – then slicing through fog that clings to the ocean surface – sets it swirling – leaving a trailing memory of the animal’s passage.

A child’s squeal breaks the spell.

My line of sight drifts toward a rocky embankment where the locals are spread about – their fishing gear in hand, and I see him.

Maybe 4 years old, the boy stands next to a man I guess to be his father.

The little guy is dressed in jean coveralls, wearing a cap with escaping shocks of fluttering golden hair. Both knees hinging; moving excitedly in a bobbing motion, one arm pointing across the water. His squeals of excitement bounce off the rocks, tumbling with soft sounds of sea breeze.

The arc in the end of the father’s fishing rod says this isn’t a big fish, but the others pull in their bait out of courtesy nonetheless, voices muted and a few smiles forming on faces, mine included – watching a mounting anticipation in the little guy.

His right fist clutches the fishing net almost as large as he, but then releases it to bounce on the sandy shore after his father’s instruction.

I walk a bit closer as I sense this is all brand new for the boy.

My mind drifts way back in time; and for only a split second it is again – all so fresh – how endearing it was to first witness the rite of passage in a child; my child.

Shoving my hands deeper into the pockets of my windbreaker, not wanting to miss anything – I wait.

His dad brings in the catch. The fish rises out of the water, the boy stands transfixed for only a few seconds – then quickly retreats two little steps as the flipping of the tail, the body twisting on the line in a final escape attempt catches him by surprise.

The dad lowers the tone of his voice to one of reassurance. “This one has more time to go, and places to see … we need to give him back, son. Hold out your hands and we will turn him loose together, OK?”

“Now” – I think to myself … ”Now is the moment.”

The boy cautiously steps forward with his little chubby hands held straight out – palms up. His dad smiles – removes the hook from the lip, lets the fishing rod rest against his shoulder and lowers himself down on one knee.

Placing the fish in the middle of the boy’s hands and encircling them with his own large ones, he gently explains, “We have to hurry now; he doesn’t breathe the way we do.”

Together they submerge the fish in the water. “OK, Jake … let go now, son.”

They both stand and watch the fish move – first slowly – then with renewed vigor into deeper water.

Jake tilts his head up to the towering figure of his father – one hand raised as a shield against the sun’s glare.

“Like that, Dad?” he whispers.

“Yes, Jake. Just like that.”
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mysterious
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October 28, 2011
How refreshing it was to read such an eloquent and tender portrayal of a child's first experience of learning how to fish with his father. As an educator, I'm pleased to read this type of high quality literature in your newspaper. This author has a wonderful way of using imagery etc. allowing the reader to relate fondly with the young child and the wonderment of his innocence. I’d be interested in learning about what other literary works this author has written.
CA_Dave
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October 28, 2011
Great story and stroll down memory lane for me. Reminded me of my first fishing trip with my dad.
SparklyEyes
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October 27, 2011
What a wonderfully well written story. The descriptions the author depicted gave me the sense of being there, smelling the ocean, watching the child and father. It took me back to a time many years ago teaching my own son to fish and watching those same reactions as the boy in the story.

I will look for more stories by this author. Perhaps he has written a book?

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